Craters and Creation

Just another environmental poem...



                        Craters and Creation       


The Earth, now a satellite,
Lies within an orbit of demolition.
Dark, damp, free of light,
A land of craters without endearing creation.

Ores once rich, filled with earthen soul,
Copious sources now a cavity deep.
With shallow minds that carve out coal,
Humans meander like mares at sleep.

One-eyed without humility, agonizing with every day,
Making every life lean and choke with terror.
Clenching their jaws, mankind's generosity at bay,
The true beings are trapped in a swirl of horror.

The beings' minds pulled clean, fire conjured in their eyes,
As the flames set around us become their own.
A blame shifts, hearts betrayed cold with ice-
Humans are the emperors in the lands they disown.


-Sahana Raghuraman


Note: Here, I am emphasizing the negative effect so that it would have an impact on people's minds.

Comments

  1. Ramani TEJuly 2, 2026 at 9:02 AM

    Very true...emperors in the lands they disown...!!!

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  2. HemasobanJuly 2, 2026 at 9:18 AM

    You have expressed in a very intense and creative way...god bless you dear

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  3. GeethavenkatJuly 2, 2026 at 10:45 AM

    Excellent work.Keep writing with the same creativity and passion.
    Well done💐💐

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  4. ShubsJuly 2, 2026 at 9:13 PM

    Such a strong message you have conveyed,keep going with the same passion,who knows how many mindsets your words are gonna change!!

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  5. Vidhya SundarJuly 2, 2026 at 9:48 PM

    Amazing work Sahana! Bitter Truth written very boldly. Wish everyone realizes the footprints they are leaving in this world and be mindful

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  6. JayashreeJuly 6, 2026 at 10:41 PM

    Profound words Sahana. Wish it reaches the millions, spoiling the environment.

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  7. Deepika ArunJuly 7, 2026 at 4:22 AM

    Such intense and profound words. Amazed at your thought process!

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  8. Gayathri C NJuly 10, 2026 at 3:50 AM

    Well done Sahana, wish it reaches the hearts of everyone and initiate mind change for the betterment of our mother Earth

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