My Mother

                            My Mother

    

My mother is fantabulous,    

Her activity being fabulous.

She does anything for me,

Better than a mother could ever be.

She does almost everything,

Being left with nothing!


My mother is not mere,

She is quick-in-thought as a deer.

She is grandma's best daughter,

Describing the delight in loads of laughter!


My, my, my,

Look at me pry!

As I pull the best out of mother,

Who is better than ever!...


-Sahana Raghuraman







    

Comments

  1. Beautiful Sahana ,well described about your mother.

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  2. Superb Sahana! Rhyming well and straight from the heart

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  3. Your poem is very nice Sahana. I like the choice of words you've used. 🙂
    From Shriyandhaa

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  4. This is really nice word wise, creative wise, feel wise and meaning wise. Overall a perfect note. Way to go Sahana.

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  5. Very nice Sahana... Keep writing...

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  6. Great write up Sahana.Wishing you all the very best in your writing endeavor.Good job!

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  7. Great job Sahana. Nice explanation about mother :) keep up the good work

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  8. Excellent write up. really admire your choice of words Sahana. Long way to go dear.

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  9. Awesome sahana 😎😄 way to go! Your mom is indeed a fantabulous person

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  10. This is beautiful dear...so sweet & cute dedication to your mom...appreciate your continuous efforts in exploring and expanding your thoughts and penning it down...Keep growing...best wishes & blessings from Maha athai 💗💗

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  11. Very nicely written Sahana!!! Keep writing more.

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  12. Wonderful Sahana beautifully articulated and written well. Kudos to you kanna👏👏

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  13. Wonderfully written Sahana. True emotions about your mother. Bless you girl with more and more success in all your endeavours

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  14. Lovely 😍. Ash i know how proud u r now😊

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